Chapter 22: Major (Please read it later)

“The girls’ stage performance was great and full of youthful energy. I really enjoyed it.”

Xu Wenzhou held up the microphone and gave his comments with a smile under the gaze of countless people.

When he's not singing, he looks like an amiable retired old man.

"what?"

“Old man on subway looking at mobile phone.jpg”

"If you like it, why did you press FALL?"

"Uncle Xu, did you press the wrong button?"

Hearing this, the audience and contestants were confused and surprised. Even Shu Yaqian on the stage looked puzzled.

However, the situation changed very quickly. The next moment, Xu Wenzhou's face turned serious and he said directly:
"The problem is with the songs, which makes me very sad."

Gu Zetao sat next to him, with a curious expression on his face.

Xu Wenzhou continued: "The composition of the song "Shinning Girl" is excellent, but the lyrics are completely different. There are too many modal particles and fragmented English words in it. There are almost no complete sentences in the whole song, and the feeling of bulk is very strong."

"When I heard the shining-ning-ning-ning and lightning-ning-ning-ning in the climax just now, I was really confused. I don't know what the lyricist wanted to express. It feels like he just forced the rhyme to look cool. It could have been a very interesting song, but because of the lack of connotation in the lyrics, it turned into a chanting song. I feel very sorry."

After the words were spoken, the whole audience was silent for three seconds, and then there was an uproar.

In the eyes of mentor Xu Wenzhou, are the problems with "Shinning Girl" so big?

"Fuck! Teacher Xu Wenzhou is simply my internet mouthpiece!"

"+1! When I listened to this song just now, I always felt that something was weird, but I just couldn't put my finger on it. I really need to let a professional explain it to me!"

“Well, this is called professionalism!”

"Teacher Xu Wenzhou's comments are really sharp. The lyrics of the song Shinning Girl are really bad! Many bloggers have made such comments online before."

"Well, actually there's nothing we can do about it. Star River Girls follows the K-pop style, and K-pop songs are almost all performed while being watched and listened to, so for the sake of the dance rhythm, there will naturally be some compromises in the lyrics."

"Indeed, if I just listened to the song without watching the MV, I would probably want to stop listening after 10 seconds."

"So the Galaxy Girls' stage performance was still great! This instructor was a little too picky."

The barrage of comments in the live broadcast room was like an avalanche, overwhelming.

On the stage, the five girls from Galaxy Girls were all a little angry.

"Shinning Girl" is the group's theme song, and they like it very much, but Xu Wenzhou criticized the lyrics of the song.

It's like someone saying your baby, who is just a few months old, is mentally retarded.

Who wouldn’t be angry if they heard this?

Although Shu Yaqian and the others knew that the lyrics of "Shinning Girl" did have some flaws, it couldn't be said to be a cliché song, right?
So annoying!

However, Shu Yaqian did not raise the microphone to argue with Xu Wenzhou because the company had rules.

Just then, Gu Zetao spoke.

He looked at the five girls on the stage with a smile on his face. "As a well-known singer in the Chinese music scene, Mr. Xu has unique insights into lyrics. He is naturally very picky in this regard. Therefore, you only need to listen to half of his comments just now."

"Besides, you didn't write the lyrics for Shinning Girl, so the blame should go to the lyricist."

At this point, Gu Zetao pointed the microphone in his hand at the audience and asked, "Do you think I am right?"

The audience was stunned for a moment, and then rushed to cheer.

"Yeah!"

"exactly!"

"That's how it should be!"

After receiving a satisfactory response, Gu Zetao took back the microphone.

The five girls on the stage smiled and bowed to express their gratitude.

Qiao Xi, the duet mentor, also spoke up: "That's right! What does the lyrics have to do with the girls? Go find the lyricist!"

A camera was in front of him, and Suning raised the microphone and nodded: "Xixi is right."

As soon as these words were spoken, the atmosphere suddenly became cheerful and the audience burst into laughter.

"Hahaha, you guys know how to divert conflicts!"

"As expected of a model couple, Suning is really good at it!" "I was caught off guard and fed a mouthful of dog food."

Xu Wenzhou was also amused. In the joyful atmosphere, the Galaxy Girls expressed their gratitude to the mentors, then left the stage and returned to the preparation room.

"A good start! A good start!"

"Welcome back!"

"Yaqian, please give me some of your good luck!"

"Yuhan, hug me~"

"Tangtang~eat well!"

In the preparation room, the female contestants who had a good relationship with the Xinghe Girls came forward to greet them and express their blessings or request blessings.

Other contestants sat in their seats with worried expressions, their hearts sank.

Even the lyrics of Shinning Girl's song were criticized by Xu Wenzhou.

What about their songs?

This is the rhythm that is destined to end!

Compared to the anxiety of these players, Bai Xingjian is sitting on the Diaoyutai.

He has a lot of lyrics this time, and since it's a song produced by Phoenix Legend, there's no need to worry about whether it has any connotations, right?
Looking at his calm look, Wang Yaqi, who was not far away, was puzzled.

Why? Why? Why?

Noticing Wang Yaqi's eyes, Bai Xingjian curled the corners of his mouth and turned his head away.

"Sister Feng, what song are you going to sing this time? Is it an original song?"

At this time, Tang Tang had returned to his seat and started chatting with Feng Shiqi.

When she talked about originality, she stretched her head and looked at Bai Xingjian.

If I remember correctly, the song "Above the Moon" was written by him himself, and was praised by mentor Gu Zetao.

Their eyes met.

Bai Xingjian smiled politely, but Tang Tang shrank back like a frightened kitten and quickly asked Sister Feng to block his view.

This brother looks so good when he smiles. I really envy Sister Feng...

“Well, it’s still original.”

Feng Shiqi nodded and turned to look at Bai Xingjian, with a proud smile on her delicate face, as if she was looking back and smiling.

Today she wore a white long skirt with a pure white hem and ethnic embroidery on the bodice and cuffs, making her look like a fairy. Her soft long hair had some waves, adding a touch of worldly air to her pure appearance.

Bai Xingjian did not look away, he just felt that he saw a scene he had never seen before.

I do not know.

That's pretty much it.

"Ah, you guys are awesome!" Tang Tang started to flatter. "I wrote the lyrics, composed the music, and arranged the music myself. It's just that today was a bit off. That old man was very, very, very picky about the lyrics."

"That's it."

Feng Shiqi looked at the real-time images on the big screen in the preparation room.

The group that was performing seemed to be a boy band, and the song was a rap song. Just after they started singing a few lines, Xu Wenzhou pressed the FALL button.

"Rhyming for the sake of rhyming, without considering the meaning of the words, and randomly putting them together, it sounds very incongruous. It's hard for Xu Wenzhou not to fall for it."

"Besides, this brother's mental state is not very good. As soon as the word FALL appeared, the drum beats got messed up."

Bai Xingjian said this while shaking his head.

It seems that this mentor is going to work hard on the contestants' lyrics today.

Feng Shiqi turned his head and looked at him, and Tang Tang stretched his head and looked at him.

They both nodded thoughtfully.

Such a professional feeling!

(End of this chapter)